Narrative Writing Test: My New Friends.

Task Description: Here is our writing test for the term and and we had to proof read it and post it on our blog. What we had to do is pick a picture and choose 1 out of 4, then we had to plan for 5 minutes then start writing for 45 minutes straight, I hope you enjoy my narrative writing.

My New Friends

A girl named Anna was a really joyful girl, she was at a wonderful school in Sydney, Australia. Anna loved all her friends and how great she was at her learning, every Saturday she and her parents go out and buy ice-cream. But Anna was the only child, so it was hard sometimes for her not talking to any but her parents. One day Anna’s parents told her some good and bad news, they were moving to a city called Madrid in Spain, but Anna was feeling sad because she didn't want to leave all her friends. Her father got a new job there, and so they had to move to Spain for the new job, Anna was down and wasn’t feeling too excited.

On the 29th of May a beautiful warming morning appeared and they arrived in Spain, then they caught a taxi to the city Midrid. They were living in an apartment up in a high building and mother couldn't wait to put Anna into a new school, so Anna could have lots of friends and start fresh. Anna’s birthday was in two days mum just remembered and said,  

“How awesome Anna, we're going to celebrate your 9th birthday here in Madrid.” she said with excitement.

As the day went past and the sun went down, Anna was finished packing her stuff in her new room, Anna was still a bit miserable but soon found a way to just be grateful,  and it was to play some board games with her family.

The next day arrived and it was Anna’s first day at Rivera Primary School, father was off to his new job and mother was getting ready, as Anna was having breakfast. Anna hopped of the chair and went to grab her backpack in her room, mother called out,

“Come on Anna you're gonna be late!.”

“Ok Mother!.” Anna yelled

They both raced to the car and drove off to school. A few moments later Anna was put into a class with a lot of kids and her class name was Tahi, which means 1. When Anna was sitting at a table everyone around her were all colouring a picture of School and writing what is amazing about school. She had received a paper and started her picture at school, soon the bell rang and that was morning tea break. She got her lunch out and ate outside on the bench, when she was playing no one wanted to play with her and that was a bit of a problem. But then it was time to go home and mum picked her up at the school gates.

As they got home mum asked,

“How was your first day at school Anna.” she said happily.

“Bad.” said Anna

“Know one didn’t want to play with me.” Anna said as well with great sadness

Mum went over and cheered her up with a snack. 

It was the next day and 1 more day till Anna turned 9, while Anna was at school again she still played on the slide by herself. But then three girls came up to her and said

“Hi my name is Galah,” Said the girl with curly hair.

“Hi my name is Emma.” Said the girl with a great big smile.

“Hi my name is Jayla.” Said the girl with a pink outfit.

Jayla went up closely and said with a happy voice,

“Would you like to come and play with us on the swings.”

Anna looked up with a huge smiley face,

“Sure I’d love to come and play,” she said.

Then they were on their way playing all around and having fun with each other. Anna felt happy and joyful to have new friends playing with her so she became their best friend and they became hers.

Finally it was Anna’s 9th birthday and she was so excited to go back to school, early in the morning mother surprised her with a pancake cake with a candle and father was even there singing Happy Birthday to her. 

Anna was at school and she and her mother decided to have a birthday party as soon as Anna came back from school, but Anna wanted to invite all of her friends from school, and she told Galah, Emma, and Jaylah to come to her birthday party. Mum was so happy that she had made friends and would be very fine with some friends coming over.

It was after school and her friends and she went to her house and had lots of fun, playing games, painting nails and baking cookies. But there was one more thing, the cake, everyone gathered and sang happy birthday to Anna and she blew her candles out and opened presents. Anna really wanted to go out for ice-cream, so her mum found a place around the corner from the building and they all had some ice-cream together.

The End