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Showing posts with label Narrative story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Narrative story. Show all posts

Thursday, 27 June 2019

The Creeped Out Book.

The Creeped Out Book-

It was dark and the wind was howling, everyone was asleep but I was the only one awake. Looking out the window it was a terrifying night and I was so creeped out about that night. After a while I was reading my book and the name of it was Creeped Out Night. There was something very strange about this book and I was keen to find out what it was.

The Next Day . . . 

Once it was morning I looked at the time and it was 8:45am, we had to get up because it was a special day for me. I thought that it was time to go to the library and find out more about this book. So then on we went with my mum, brother ( Bob), and I. We arrived at the library and barely anyone was there, so we went inside to see what we could find.

A while ago . . .

We talked to the lady at the counter and asked her if she knew this book. The lady led us to the shelf of scary books and showed us a poster. The poster had the book that I was reading on it, it said beware of this book because it will give you nightmares. I was terrified and scared, but once the lady showed me the iele she left straight away like she was scared too. But something that I didn’t was wrong, on the poster at the bottom of the page it said check on page 127, there is another page stuck to it and it tells you more about the book. Me and my brother raced back to the car to get the book and once we got it we raced back inside.

2 minutes later . . . 


Bob and I sat at the table while our mum was looking at some other books. We cut open the page and it came with a message, it said if you are reading this go to the earth globe and crack it open. Find the light and it will glow, I went to the globe and did what it asked. Bob came with me to the globe and we opened it together, it looked like it was already opened for somebody to check it out. As we both peered at the glow and took it out, it was a pearl golden ball that was glowing. The little ball had some kind of spell and we both went back to the book.

1 sec later  . . . 

As we back to the book and opened it again it said something else at the very bottom of the page. We read it and it said once you have found the pearl ball say a wish and it would come true. But be very careful what you wish for because it might ruin your whole life, if possible. There was also a tip right next to the fancy writing, it said Tip:If you are trying to get rid of this book, you would need to make the one wish with that golden ball. But if you don’t you will have that book forever, because if you throw it in the trash it will come back straight to where you left it. In other ways it would follow you everywhere you go, and it’s very creepy, that’s why in the middle or beginning of the story it said (it will give you nightmares). So you must do the following things it tells you to do first or make the decision to get rid of the book.


After Bob and I read the Tip bit we were really scared, so we got the golden ball and held it in both of our hands. We both said “Golden ball Golden ball whish us this wish, take this book and send it away for good”, after 2 seconds they donked each other in the head and looked straight in the eye of each other. It was time to go home and mum saw them on the floor, “are you ok yous two” mum said with a sigh. Mum heard the big bang that happened with the golden ball, both of the boys looked around and the book was gone. They both popped up and hugged each other in relief, they said “few that was a mission (kind of)” they were so happy that the book was gone.
The End.

Task Description: This is a narrative writing that we had to do but with the voice type. We all had to use voice type witch was on tools and we had to use the picture at the top to help us. If you read the story the picture will show what it is doing too and this is the piece of writing that I have done in the middle. Hope you enjoy reading my narrative story about The Creeped Out Book. This book would give you nightmares and will make you get scared everyday (only if you read the story. May god bless you and your family, and make sure to be happy, warm, and safe.
Bye bye

Wednesday, 27 September 2017

The Story About The Flying Shark.

Once upon a time in a Never Land Island there became a shark who fly's and a bit like a foolish shark. But this shark ain't an ordinary  shark it is a shark who controls the weather. Also he kind of raps to.
Boom! Mind Blown

Then one day I thought that I could go to this island if it is possible Hmmm…. Yup it is. The Never Land Island must be far away. So we should use a map. “There it is I shouted” out loud. The next mystiorse day. That was the island where people have never been that's why it is called the Never land island I spotted.

When I was walking along the beach on that same island I saw something mysterious. When I started getting closer and closer it was a SHARK. "A flying shark" I yelled out loud. Then the shark went what,  who said that he was so confused because he did realise that this was a Never land island right?

That same day I raced back to boat thinking very weirdly. Dogh silly me this might be a mistake I thought. I went back outside and I thought that I should check if it is real. When I saw the flying shark he went oh my god thank goodness there not a monster on this Island. Oh sorry did I scare you of that other time, so sorry let me introduce myself. “Hi I’m Spook the flying shark as usual” he said with a little sigh. “Hi” I said can we friends, of course we can did know that I can rap and also control the weather cool right.

Then next following week we became best friends for ever even with a shark. some nights he sang me some of is cool rap songs. He will go flying in the sky even at night time. We are going to be together for ever.

The End

Walt: Link my ideas between each paragraph
Task Description: This is a cool narrative story about a flying shark who can rap  and a shark who can control the weather.

Thursday, 31 August 2017

Pass The Parcel Story.

One day I was walking to school. When I looked behind me there was a monster chasing me. Hahahaha I was running as fast as I can. But it could not stop, it was too much. So I turned and roared at it. It was so scared and then  it ran away never to be seen again.



I was so scared I went home because I thought it was going to come back. I was scared so I went Straight to bed because I didn’t want to go out of my bed and out of my home too.

Then when I woke up I saw the monster again. He told me that he was sorry and he only wanted to say if I wanted to go to a disco. Then I said yes I would like to go to a disco. But when I went to the disco I started to talk to the food and all the people around me thought I was so crazy and coko because I was just talking to food!