Don't Let Go.

WALT: Write a narrative using dialogue.

Task Description: This week for writing we had to write a narrative called don't let go and use this picture to guide us through. We have been learning about using lots and lots of dialogue to our writing so it can make our writing more better.

It was a dark and stormy night when Amelia was having a cup of tea and sweets. Her mum and dad didn’t live with her, it was only her Aunt Precious and her secret animal friends. But there was an interruption when she was having her supper, someone knocked at the door and the princess was confused because no one comes at this time of the night. She went and opened it and there was a lady with a black hood and a walking stick. The lady gave her a blue stone that was glowing white. She didn't know what to do but take it, the lady said once a full moon everything is permanent. So basically it was a wishing stone, but it was weird how the lady came to her door late at this time of the night.

The next morning it was very sunny and Princess Amelia got up, got ready, and headed down stairs for breakfast. Aunt Precious was making pancakes with orange juice on the side. Amelia couldn’t stop thinking about the stone, she would love to have a ball in her very own castle, she thought. But it can’t happen in my caste she thought again, maybe she would wish for an invitation to a ball from the royal prince.

In the afternoon she went to her secret garden with the stone, and sat on her swing. As she was looking and looking at her ‘Blue Glowing Stone’ she said I wish. . .  for an invitation to a ball. As the stone began to float and everything was just frozen for a bit. Once it had stopped everything was normal, and the Princess went to look around and there was nothing.

When it came to the evening of the day there was a knock at the door, and there was a man with a scroll. The man gave to her and she read it out loud,

“You are invited to my castle ball which will begin at 7:45pm, so don’t be late, Yours sincerely Prince ----” the princess was surprised.

So she closed the door and went upstairs to get ready, her Aunt came with her to see what she was doing, 

|“What are you doing Amelia” 

“I’m going out for the night so I won’t be late”

“All right then, don’t forget to be back by 9:00pm”

“Ok” she replied back

Finally it was time to go, but when she got her purse and went out the door, she forgot to order a ride. But then she remembered that the stone could wish her anything, so she grabbed the stone and wished . . .