Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Stuck In A Jar Trap.

Once upon a time there was a girl named Lucy and she was 10 years old. She went to her friends house and they were magic people. Then they both went in her friends room and it had a lot of potions in it, then Lucy accidentally tipped  a potion  over and the glass and  cracked it  and went all around her. Then she was in a different country called Paris . Also she was in a large jar in the Awesome Forest and this happened on her 10th Birthday.

Then Lucy “said help me she screamed” she was so hungry and thirsty. She slept overnight and then there was something in her pocket. It was a little fairy she was very tiny and her name was Lillyana. She fell in her pocket when Lucy tipped over the potion and the shelf wriggled a little bit. After that she gave Lucy some food and water then Lucy ’’said thank you’’ then Lillyana ’’said you well come’’ know let's get you out here 1, 2 3 presto.

After that they  were back in Lucy’s friends room she was looking everywhere even in China and India. Also her parents were worried too they were so happy to see her. Then they “said it is still some ones birthday” let’s go out and get some dinner at your favourite place Hong Kong. “Well then let’s go” said Lucy “I’m starving”.


  1. Hi Paige your story is like one that is in a real story.You have added lots of details and lot of good words.Good job and Keep up the great work.

  2. You are kind to me so I will be kind to you paige .